MrJenius's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Deveraux]

Very nice, a little too long for its content, but overall sounds good

BeeFef responds:

Maybe in the future, I could add more detail and variety in my music next time. Thanks for the opinion so I can make better stuff!

[(WIP) Fight or Flight Remastered Preview]

As a musical experiment it is a good piece, but as, you know, music, not so much.

As a experiment 5/5, as a song 2/5

Doublechindoge7 responds:

Yeah, Hopefully when I polish it all off and get it done it'll sound more like an actual song...

[Gansh - Nine Milli [FULL]]

Lacks some melodic sound to it, you gotta be careful to balance, way to bass heavy. Sounds like it has potential though.

Gansh responds:

As I said to another reviewer, this Vaportrap, a fusion between Trap and Vaporwave. Google it

[Zound - Neon Battleground]

At 00:24 it just gets crowded. Has some good sound to it. Ready for that bass drop annnnnd-- what -- what happened, I'm ready, and theres another one... oh okay.... oh and another one... alright.. THERE WE GO!! Thats legit! 1:41 that sounds amazing.

Too many base drop rises, I dont even know what to call them, but they are everywhere and sound weird to me, but besides that it was pretty cool.

3:15 that piano sounds clashes with the other sounds, sounds like a key change trying to go on that leads to nothing, advice against it

To many high noises 4:15 --> for a bit. what was before at a comfortable volume I had to turn down, always a shame.

Overall pretty solid, has room for improvement I believe.

Doublechindoge7 responds:

Thanks I guess that's pretty fair, I have a pretty high tolerance for high pitched noises so I didn't really notice the problem there, but looking back on it, I could understand how many other people would be bothered by that...

I tend to be indecisive of when my drop should be on MMJ, so that's another flaw I'll work on, and yes, I admit I can often make parts too... Crowded... The only criticism I don't get is the piano, what do you mean by key change that leads on to nothing?

[XTechno - Here be Dragons...]

Very unique. Felt like it could have used a bit more by 00:35, at 0:48 I liked what you did with it. Got a little too crowded at 00:56 when you brought in both at once. between 00:56-01:20 could use work in my opinion. After that you need to change something, got too repetitive for me.

I can't stress the over crowding enough, its just a little over, if you fixed that I think it would sound way better. Also weirdness at 2:40, feels like you just drop and throws me out of whatever groovyness it had.

Very promising though!

XTheNewgrounder responds:

Yeah, I have a bit of a problem with putting in a lot of stuff in a song at once. Thanks for the feedback!

[Save Rush]

I found it pretty peaceful, it was entertaining for a bit, every time I was about to criticize it for being boring something came up. Nothing I would listen to for a long time, or even the full 4 minutes, but it kept my attention for a good portion of the song, and its longer then most songs, so I see nothing wrong with this

octopus58 responds:

Thanks!

I understand that sometimes people are not interested with some repetitive sequences, and I'm trying to avoid that in my future pieces by having more variations within the time that its happening. Glad you like it anyways though :)