MrJenius's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[05a-Solid Sparkle-Mention]

at 1:02 wheres it go? I'm really confused to this, maybe a miss upload? idk?

StormCloud96 responds:

what do you mean? it loops at 1:02 if that's what you mean, the sudden cut is part of the song. it does the same thing at the very end, too.

[GearWax- Occulus]

Nothing like some good pian-wah. Thought it glitched out at 00:06 when it does that weird thing, restarted song to find it really was just weird, okay no biggie....

And wow man the timing of things are just really extremely off here and there throws it off a LOT

Has some pretty cool style to it, if you put more time into it I think it could be a lot better, just seemed to lack quality but was very unique and has potential.

2:00 These effects make me want to die.... oh please make them stop

Having a hard time keeping my attention after that. Gunna go now, good try.

Iosun responds:

Thanks for being honest, but I don't know WHAT you're talking about at 0:06. I didn't quantize parts of it because then I felt they were too structured. The effects are there on purpose.

[S.P.Y ft. Diane Charlemagne - Dusty Fingers (Deastani Remix)]

Beginning has a real surreal feel to it, very cool. 00:40 feels a bit too crammed for a few seconds. Such a cool drop thing though. 1:25 kinda almost loosing me again. I really really like the style, found it so entertaining, I think I liked the style more then a lot of the production quality though, like just the way the piano and synth thing went together sometimes just threw me off. But this is so entertaining it almost makes up for it! Well done.

retestment responds:

thanks for the feedback! working on my production quality still so I can see where your coming from, but glad to know it's entertaining!

[Lost File]

Too boring, absolutely nothing happens, takes 3 minutes to make a track like this, way too many clashes, sorry man bleeding ears.

WasderNoob-MatiasSWA responds:

Thanks for the feedback. I honestly agree that this is a fiasco when it comes to being exciting and interesting however remember that this track is an expiremental bit. Over all this took like 10 minutes or less to make, mostly deticated to making the melody and finishing this up. I just left the file alone after about a month or two. I don't believe there were too many clashes but I'll try to at least filter or just tone down the amount of repetition to it.

[Cyborg]

Beginning I found much too distorted, first thought was AGH EW! Drums come in and its like Oooooo Sexy. Then at 00:30 the more distortion threw me off again. 00:48 now I'm just feeling its crowded.

Sorry man had a good feel bout it after that first part but just kinda feels all thrown into a bowl and stirred up now.

All thats left now is the ending..... Annnnnd..... Annnnd.... Okay nothing special but could be worse.

Idk dude not mah thing.

Digiguy responds:

Sorry you didn't like it. I'm always experimenting. Thanks for the honest criticism!

[Automatic]

At the beginning it was really solid. But it still seemed slightly off for me. You have to be really careful when you are using this many sounds to make sure that the sounds all complement each other a bit more sometimes. I had the same issue when I made my first tracks. Sometimes less is more. I know you feel, because there are so many cool sounds and it just almost goes together all so perfectly, but just slow down, take your time, and listen carefully. You seem to have some natural music blood in you though.

K-oztron responds:

Ill keep that in mind, thanks for taking the time to write so much :)

[Oracion (Nine Echoes Cover)]

In itself I wouldnt say it was the best. But for what your goal was and using orchestra I thought you did a pretty good job. And I enjoyed it a fair bit I suppose, nicely done.

NevoMusic responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Wubbin' (VIP Loop)]

I feel ya bro, some interesting things happen with clashing notes sometimes, but there was just not enough resolves pulling it together... just cant get into it, sorry man.

Theepicosity responds:

Yeah, I know. There probably shouldn't've been any flat notes in there, for that kinda puts the sounds around it in dissonance.

[Hi Y3ti - Game Over]

Oooooo, wow, that was, hah, ah, omg, I love it. The characters all sounded even. I looked really hard for anything I did not like. The only thing is that it gets a little repetitive, but it's dub-step so I suppose that's okay, still would have been nice to have a more drastic change in there, honestly so close to a 5 star for me, but a change up would have done it.

HiY3ti responds:

I made changes to the second drop, regarding noises, and such, but not to the sound design. I don't think you can notice it, though, because it's not drastic. Next time, I'll change the sound, not the rhythm.

Thanks for your honesty! :3

[~Fallen Dunes~ (Mharadium & Negativity OST)]

It has a feel to it, which is especially good when it's made for a game. The drums were done pretty interestingly. 1:30 ish it got almost a little too crowded in my opinion. But the song it has a good uniqueness to it that I like. I was scared when I read off tune, cause some people wayyyy overdue and it just, well, makes my ears bleed. This did not do that nearly as much.

Evilgrapez responds:

Thanks! I tried to make sure the offtune stuff wasn't painful to listen to or anything. Thanks for your feedback!