MrJenius's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Distant]

Lacks any stability. If you want it to be graded as a musical experiment you should express that that is what it is. As a song I'd have to say it needs to have at least a little bit of consistency. It just went everywhere, and at 1:20 a loop that was really choppy started. Just a lot that needs to be touched up and just stitched together.

[Arial Bombard]

Cool sounds, interesting little melody at the beginning of the track. Sounds way too slurred at 00:24 despite such a good start. I think the pickup on that synth sound thing is way to slow for the speed which you are changing it. If you tweaked this a lot you could evolve it into something good, but theres just too much wrong with it right now. I enjoyed the intro though!

octopus58 responds:

Eh it just varies by preference, but I understand why you wouldn't like it. Thanks for the criticism though, very appreciated :)

[Waiting for Dawn [WIP]]

Intro is a little long, at 1:10 ish when the guitar came in it felt a little overcrowded. Feels like a solid base for something greater, something more to it. Could still use work but has good potential.

mauiboynokaoi responds:

Intro was only 8 bars long. Verses will kick in at around 0:16 and chorus drops at 0:50. And yes I am still thinking about the distorted piano. I could simply remove it, but I'll probably end up replacing it with something else. Still working on the countermelodies, but we'll see where this goes.

[Metal core - demo]

I honestly do not have a lot of experience with rock/metal/core/heavy, but I thought it was pretty cool, sounded, interesting. Disregarding personal preference I'd say a good 3.5/5

[Deveraux]

Very nice, a little too long for its content, but overall sounds good

BeeFef responds:

Maybe in the future, I could add more detail and variety in my music next time. Thanks for the opinion so I can make better stuff!

[(WIP) Fight or Flight Remastered Preview]

As a musical experiment it is a good piece, but as, you know, music, not so much.

As a experiment 5/5, as a song 2/5

Doublechindoge7 responds:

Yeah, Hopefully when I polish it all off and get it done it'll sound more like an actual song...