Classic organ.... Just jamming.... Okay man sorry this aint got anything special to it. Upload Mary had a Little Lamb while your at it why dont ya, sorry dude.
Classic organ.... Just jamming.... Okay man sorry this aint got anything special to it. Upload Mary had a Little Lamb while your at it why dont ya, sorry dude.
Wow that totally wasn't rude at all :\
1:00 that voice I think would be a lot better if you laid off the distortion just a touch more
1:35 nonononononono gosh no it had such a cool promise, bleeding. agh. Sorry man this is bad I'm gone. Distortion, wayyyyy too much distortion.
at 1:02 wheres it go? I'm really confused to this, maybe a miss upload? idk?
what do you mean? it loops at 1:02 if that's what you mean, the sudden cut is part of the song. it does the same thing at the very end, too.
Nothing like some good pian-wah. Thought it glitched out at 00:06 when it does that weird thing, restarted song to find it really was just weird, okay no biggie....
And wow man the timing of things are just really extremely off here and there throws it off a LOT
Has some pretty cool style to it, if you put more time into it I think it could be a lot better, just seemed to lack quality but was very unique and has potential.
2:00 These effects make me want to die.... oh please make them stop
Having a hard time keeping my attention after that. Gunna go now, good try.
Thanks for being honest, but I don't know WHAT you're talking about at 0:06. I didn't quantize parts of it because then I felt they were too structured. The effects are there on purpose.
Beginning has a real surreal feel to it, very cool. 00:40 feels a bit too crammed for a few seconds. Such a cool drop thing though. 1:25 kinda almost loosing me again. I really really like the style, found it so entertaining, I think I liked the style more then a lot of the production quality though, like just the way the piano and synth thing went together sometimes just threw me off. But this is so entertaining it almost makes up for it! Well done.
thanks for the feedback! working on my production quality still so I can see where your coming from, but glad to know it's entertaining!
Pretty legit man. kept it interesting throughout the song good job.
Too boring, absolutely nothing happens, takes 3 minutes to make a track like this, way too many clashes, sorry man bleeding ears.
Thanks for the feedback. I honestly agree that this is a fiasco when it comes to being exciting and interesting however remember that this track is an expiremental bit. Over all this took like 10 minutes or less to make, mostly deticated to making the melody and finishing this up. I just left the file alone after about a month or two. I don't believe there were too many clashes but I'll try to at least filter or just tone down the amount of repetition to it.
Beginning I found much too distorted, first thought was AGH EW! Drums come in and its like Oooooo Sexy. Then at 00:30 the more distortion threw me off again. 00:48 now I'm just feeling its crowded.
Sorry man had a good feel bout it after that first part but just kinda feels all thrown into a bowl and stirred up now.
All thats left now is the ending..... Annnnnd..... Annnnd.... Okay nothing special but could be worse.
Idk dude not mah thing.
Sorry you didn't like it. I'm always experimenting. Thanks for the honest criticism!
At the beginning it was really solid. But it still seemed slightly off for me. You have to be really careful when you are using this many sounds to make sure that the sounds all complement each other a bit more sometimes. I had the same issue when I made my first tracks. Sometimes less is more. I know you feel, because there are so many cool sounds and it just almost goes together all so perfectly, but just slow down, take your time, and listen carefully. You seem to have some natural music blood in you though.
Ill keep that in mind, thanks for taking the time to write so much :)
00:19-00:21 the base is off, at that point periodically, besides that it was pretty freaking awesome start, like 00:57 again there.... I was so ready to be into it but every single time man. But considering it did have decent promise. Also end I thought was kinda wack. But good job.
I like to make pixel art, other art, and music
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Saskatoon, SK, Canada
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