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Lacks any stability. If you want it to be graded as a musical experiment you should express that that is what it is. As a song I'd have to say it needs to have at least a little bit of consistency. It just went everywhere, and at 1:20 a loop that was really choppy started. Just a lot that needs to be touched up and just stitched together.

See the tricky part of this is I'm not sure if this is an original piece from you. But it sounds quite nice, and I do believe it has achieved its potential as a piano piece.

Cool sounds, interesting little melody at the beginning of the track. Sounds way too slurred at 00:24 despite such a good start. I think the pickup on that synth sound thing is way to slow for the speed which you are changing it. If you tweaked this a lot you could evolve it into something good, but theres just too much wrong with it right now. I enjoyed the intro though!

octopus58 responds:

Eh it just varies by preference, but I understand why you wouldn't like it. Thanks for the criticism though, very appreciated :)

Wow, sounds really tranquil, sounded quite professional, sounds were balanced with can be a challenge with tracks like these, especially with such diversity, well done.

Grandvision responds:

Thank you. I tried my best, there were lots of variations on the dynamics and play style of the instruments. Did you have a chance to check out the project image screenshot in the description? It shows it in more detail.

I see how the clash of notes with it resolving is suppose to sound nice, but I think it takes it a little too far. Had a unique touch with the voice, but besides that I did not enjoy it.

NovaDrome responds:

what part EXACTLY did you not like? Remember, this was my FIRST SONG using Ableton Live... I'm always looking for constructive criticism!

Intro is a little long, at 1:10 ish when the guitar came in it felt a little overcrowded. Feels like a solid base for something greater, something more to it. Could still use work but has good potential.

mauiboynokaoi responds:

Intro was only 8 bars long. Verses will kick in at around 0:16 and chorus drops at 0:50. And yes I am still thinking about the distorted piano. I could simply remove it, but I'll probably end up replacing it with something else. Still working on the countermelodies, but we'll see where this goes.

Good intro, the sounds were really fresh. I was pretty excited for the drop or intro into the dubstep portion before it came, but once it came I found it a little light. I was expecting something a little more from the beginning of the song, but the rest sounded really good.

I honestly do not have a lot of experience with rock/metal/core/heavy, but I thought it was pretty cool, sounded, interesting. Disregarding personal preference I'd say a good 3.5/5

Very nice, a little too long for its content, but overall sounds good

BeeFef responds:

Maybe in the future, I could add more detail and variety in my music next time. Thanks for the opinion so I can make better stuff!

As a musical experiment it is a good piece, but as, you know, music, not so much.

As a experiment 5/5, as a song 2/5

Doublechindoge7 responds:

Yeah, Hopefully when I polish it all off and get it done it'll sound more like an actual song...

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