MrJenius's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Trapped in a Thought]

Interesting, not sure I love it, but it did not make my eyes bleed. When you introduced the faster piano at 1:00 It made it a lot better, and I enjoyed that a lot. Transitions were smooth.

[\|Δ|/ Darknote]

Did not sound overly great to me. Was a bit too random with the note hitting at some points. Felt a little bland, like someone going on a piano for the first time and hitting random keys one at a time. Perhaps experiments with other sounds would help. And the development of a more distinguishable pattern in the melody.

3Delta responds:

Actually this was an experimental song, and I can clearly see it did NOT work. I just couldn't get the hang of chromatism quite right. Thanks for the review anyway

[Zel - One More Time]

Groovy, not even sure what to think about it ahahha, the piano felt a little too scaly in my opinion, but still good. Very nice diversity, too many songs which do not change throughout the whole thing, even I am guilty of that. Kept my attention.

[Neon Starlight Remijj]

Could use a slightly smoother intro, trust me, everyone forgets sometimes, don't worry. As for the body of the song, thought it was entertaining. Had diversity in it throughout, so that was good. Cant say I like the sounds themselves that much, but the melody is good. I love the diversity, also slightly smoother outro would be good. Very nice besides that.

Aecis responds:

Thank you for a great review. I felt like my previous submission of this did not have enough diversity so I tried my best to make different parts of the song feel different. Although I am really happy the way it is, remixes and chipstep are new to me. I will learn much quicker from comments like yours. Thank you

[Keep It Cool (8-Bit Style)]

At 00:56 that was a bad cut, not sure what exactly happened there but it is not a smooth transition. The whole thing is not overall pleasing to my ears. And the bell stuff around 1:50 I find a little weird, You do bring in other things around it eventually that make it sound good but that takes too long imo. 2:50 I found interesting enough.

bj007pro responds:

I am really glad you reviewed my track! I am very appreciating the this feedback!
(Because you're the second one, thanks again!)

I'll see out why that happened at 0:56 it didn't happen during recording. (The program I use makes you listen to your track while it exports. - It let's you edit while it records too, which I like.)

And you also say I should've added more tracks earlier on. I'll take that in consideration. :)

[Return to Void]

Did not personally enjoy it. at 1:07 something formulates, but it still lacks.

[10 years passed]

Melody at beginning was pretty nice, but unfortunately after a little bit it started to feel a little bit random to me. The whole song had a kind of randomness to it. It needs at least a slight pattern in my opinion. It's okay to surprise people, but its also good to allow them to have at least a wild guess at what is coming next.

[Pángxiè]

Interesting beginning, but then it just got repetitive, I understand its Ambient, but took tell 1:50 tell I started to feel like this song was creating a world or mood around me, which is what Ambient typically does. After that it was a lot better.

[RAW]

Sounded good, no clashing notes. Solid beat. Lacked some diversity throughout the whole song though. Caught the loop at 1:32, not quite quite smooth, could touch that up. Got quite repetitive same melody again and again and again. But good besides that

larrynachos responds:

Thanks for the honest review! Glad it satisfied you :D

[Chemicals (XsalvaZ Remix)]

Piano at the beginning is a nice touch. I have not heard the original song that you are remixing, but this was pleasing to listen to.